Joz Posted June 15, 2011 Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 You don't know how my mind works at a million miles an hour. My imagination churning out images faster and faster. Gears in clockwork clicking and clacking, silent outside eyes of fascination. Inside this carefully crafted life; outside is a crafty lie.A mystery best left undiscovered; a pain left best unrecovered. But a mind that sees into darkest depths; can't be seen by brightest eyes. Sadness in hearts so blind; blinded by nothing with pain inside. Irrelevant color stains ideals; fears whisper into our ears; paranoia and prejudice force our hands. Life lives life to the fullest; fulfillment in slander, horror and lies. Strange times watched afar, ever after the word is spread. Forever saying what is never said, always waiting without our heads. Promised not what we have bled, only what lies and truth we shed. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator madd-hatter Posted June 15, 2011 Administrator Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Didn't care for the first two, the third one flows nicely. The second one reminded me the Smashing Pumpkins for some reason. I hate the Smashing Pumpkins. There's no earthly way of knowingWhich direction we are going. There's no knowing where we're rowing Or which way the river's flowing. Is it raining? Is it snowing? Is a hurricane a blowing? Not a speck of light is showing so the danger must be growing. Are the fires of hell a glowing? Is the grisly reaper mowing? Yes! The danger must be growing For the rowers keep on rowing. And they're certainly not showing any signs that they are slowing! I win. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joz Posted June 15, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Didn't care for the first two, the third one flows nicely. The second one reminded me the Smashing Pumpkins for some reason. I hate the Smashing Pumpkins. There's no earthly way of knowingWhich direction we are going. There's no knowing where we're rowing Or which way the river's flowing. Is it raining? Is it snowing? Is a hurricane a blowing? Not a speck of light is showing so the danger must be growing. Are the fires of hell a glowing? Is the grisly reaper mowing? Yes! The danger must be growing For the rowers keep on rowing. And they're certainly not showing any signs that they are slowing! I win. Copying willy-wonka doesn't count. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator madd-hatter Posted June 15, 2011 Administrator Report Share Posted June 15, 2011 Hey, what's good is good. That's all there is to it. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rike1 Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 Love is Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bape. Posted June 16, 2011 Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 i do some spoken word. Ever catch yourself in a slump?Where you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joz Posted June 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted June 16, 2011 What not in flames heed the call - awake to the rain fall. // Cry out eyes in tears and face the pain - surrender to the day. // Ever after hate is long - shortened lives carry on. //Walk away, run this way, crawl till dusk is night and dawn. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rike1 Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 i do some spoken word. Ever catch yourself in a slump?Where you Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bape. Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 haven't had the balls to do that in front of a big audience yet haha but there are some outlets. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Administrator madd-hatter Posted June 17, 2011 Administrator Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 It was pretty good... Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bape. Posted June 17, 2011 Report Share Posted June 17, 2011 thanks man! it actually is one of my favs that ive written. with school work and other stuff I never have time to sit and write more. though i usually work best at those 2-3 am where random creative spur of the moments arise. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
rike1 Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 haven't had the balls to do that in front of a big audience yet haha but there are some outlets. You just gotta go to some open mic nights and do it. People at those things are very supportive. Don't think about; go and perform. The poem I posted is the piece I do for open mic nights and I didn't even plan on performing it the first time. I went with some friends and they wound up getting me on stage. If you enjoy what you are creating it's really something to see the reaction you get from an audience. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bape. Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 haven't had the balls to do that in front of a big audience yet haha but there are some outlets. You just gotta go to some open mic nights and do it. People at those things are very supportive. Don't think about; go and perform. The poem I posted is the piece I do for open mic nights and I didn't even plan on performing it the first time. I went with some friends and they wound up getting me on stage. If you enjoy what you are creating it's really something to see the reaction you get from an audience. thanks man! i might just do that. there are some open mic nights at a few shops around me along with on campus. i'll try it out haha Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uker Posted June 18, 2011 Report Share Posted June 18, 2011 Matt, I will take credit for your success by showing you binary star Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Bape. Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 lmfao thanks mike. you know i still listen to them still? one.be.lo will always be one of the most underrated rappers ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Uker Posted June 19, 2011 Report Share Posted June 19, 2011 Haha I do too, however I haven't had a lot of time lately to discover new stuff.....oh well. At least I got the classics! lmfao thanks mike. you know i still listen to them still? one.be.lo will always be one of the most underrated rappers ever Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joz Posted September 16, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 16, 2011 Boredom breads emocreativiity on facebook [Every single memory we make, is all but forgotten when we wake. And every single time that we take, to tell those around us to forget all that we hate. And all that remains is what makes us become what we hate, forever waking up to the memories that we wish we didn't make. And now that we are here and alone we look back on our past, uncertain and unknown. We look into the future so bright, realizing with fright what lies we might write. And all that we know and we hate, and all those memories we make all but forgotten with this fate.] Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
ruksak Posted September 16, 2011 Report Share Posted September 16, 2011 Here's my poem; Fuck you, you lip-skidding jew Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
Joz Posted September 19, 2011 Author Report Share Posted September 19, 2011 Here's my poem;Fuck you, you lip-skidding jew Your imagination and deliver of content is staggering. Link to comment Share on other sites More sharing options...
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